ACCT11059 – Feedback Process

Here is evidence that I have posted my assignment one draft work in the blog discussion forum on Moodle. Here is the link to the forum: https://moodle.cqu.edu.au/mod/forum/discuss.php?d=111357

I have provided valuable feedback to three (3) other students within the course. The feedback that I have given to the other students can be found below. I have also provided their individual feedback in the discussion forum on Moodle. I have included a link to where the discussion has occurred.

Feedback that I provided to three other students:

Feedback From: Sophie Nevison

Feedback To: Aliza Suluvale

Aliza, you have created a well-structured blog post that appeals to the eyes of your readers. You have explicitly explained in detail the functions and operations of your listed company thoroughly, which clearly indicates to me that you have extensively researched your company in depth. I believe that this has enabled you to thoroughly observe and analyse your firm’s annual reports and financial statements in great depth.

Aliza, your blog was easy to navigate with the utilisation of appropriate headings to assist with this. However, I would have liked for you to have included in there somewhere a brief paragraph explaining and detailing some of the key challenges that your firm has faced over the last financial year and detailing how your firm appears to be meeting and complying with these challenges; what are their apparent strategies?

Aliza, your spelling and grammar was well satisfactory and consistent across all your blog posts. Well done Aliza. You’re well on track. Great effort.

Regards,

Sophie Nevison

North Rockhampton Campus

Discussion link: https://moodle.cqu.edu.au/mod/forum/discuss.php?d=110207#p302874 (Feedback was provided to Aliza on March 20th 2016)

 

Feedback From: Sophie Nevison

Feedback To: Muhammad Hamzah Simmonds Bin Abdullah

Muhammad, you have created a well-structured blog post that appeals to the eyes of your readers. You have explicitly explained in detail the functions and operations of your listed company thoroughly, which clearly indicates to me that you have extensively researched your company in depth and have obtained an extensive knowledge into your firm as a result. Well done.

I thoroughly enjoyed reading about your firms key challenges that they faced over the last financial year and their apparent strategies in dealing with these challenges. You have gone into great depths here and clearly indicates that you have researched your firm thoroughly to be able to do this. Great work.

Muhammad, I liked how you mentioned that your firm ‘is making great steps in making their workplace free form discrimination’. However, I would have liked a brief explanation as to how your firm is achieving this as I strongly think that this is a great aspect of any business.

Muhammad, your blog was easy to navigate with the utilisation of appropriate headings to assist with this. Your spelling and grammar was well consistent and satisfactory across all your blog posts.

Well done Muhammad. Great effort.

Regards,

Sophie Nevison

North Rockhampton Campus

Discussion link: https://moodle.cqu.edu.au/mod/forum/discuss.php?d=110446#p302879 (Feedback was provided to Muhammad on March 20th 2016)

 

Feedback From: Sophie Nevison

Feedback To: Sophie Coleman

Sophie, you have created a well-structured blog post that appeals to the eyes of your readers. Your blog was easy to navigate with the utilisation of appropriate headings to assist with this. Well done.

You have explicitly explained in detail the functions and operations of your listed company which clearly indicates to me that you have conducted thorough research into your firm. This needs to be commended. I believe that this has also enabled you to go in-depth about your firms key challenges that they have faced and you have been able to provide us with sufficient evidence that demonstrations how your firm has overcome these challenges.

Sophie, you have effectively been able to analysis your firm’s annual reports and financial statements in great depth and this is evident with the comprehensive completion of your spreadsheet.

Your punctuation and choice of words is consistently correct.

Well done Sophie. Great effort.

Regards,

Sophie Nevison

North Rockhampton Campus

Discussion link: https://moodle.cqu.edu.au/mod/forum/discuss.php?d=110910#p302885 (Feedback was provided to Sophie on March 20th 2016)

 

 

 

 

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